Not good at all
I'm sorry man, but this doesn't sound good at all to me. No offense meant, but it just sounds like you played around for a while in FL and thought you had a song.
It's you opinion, you're entitled to it. I disagree, there is a large amount of structure to the song, the riff itself is largely repeated either reversed or both reversed and forwarded combined.
I mean, I normally I hate hip-hop, but I really loved this song. Really great work, both in the composing and in the recording of the song.
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